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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:59 pm | |
| ~'Prologue'~
Gwen wants a new life. She never gets what she wants. Her little sister Stacy is annoying and is a spoiled brat. Her Teacher is always on her nerves. Until she met Vampire twins Angel (Real name Bianca) and Dylan. You'll have to see what happens in A New Life.
Chapter 1 Same old, Same old...
Beep, beep, beep. Why does it have to be Monday today?? Gwen thought. She threw the covers over her head. Stacy barged into Gwen's room, bouncing on her bed. "TIME FOR SCHOOL, LAZY BUTT!" Stacy screamed in Gwen's ear. Stacy was only 6, so, lazy butt was a curse to her.
Gwen jumped out of bed and grabbed the back of her nightgown. "Don't ever, call me that again Miss Cashmere Slippers!" Gwen said sternly. Stacy ran downstairs. "MMOOMMYY!! Gwen yelled at me!!!" Stacy said crying. "GWEN! COME DOWN HERE!" Gwen's Mom yelled up the stairs. Gwen came down in her broken heart graphic tee, black converse, and jeans. She picked up her lunch and bookbag. "Bye Mom." Gwen opened the door and went in the bus. In Class, Gwen's teacher, Mrs. O'Ryan was doing Math. "Gwen." Mrs O'Ryan said. Gwen looked up. "What is 491 times 12?" Gwen scribbled some stuff on her paper. "5,806?" Gwen questioned. "Nope. Tiffany?" Tiffany was the richest in all of the 5th Grade. "5,892!" Tiffany exclaimed. "Correct!" Mrs. O'Ryan replied. The bell rang. When Gwen was on the bus, she saw two very pale twins. They can't be! But the skin.. It's white! Gwen thought. When Gwen got in her house she wrote down in her journal. 3:30 P.M. I just saw vampire twins.
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:59 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:00 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:00 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:00 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:00 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:00 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:00 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:00 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:01 pm | |
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Druqqie Adminstrator
Posts : 3660 Reputation : 47 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : New York.
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Sun Aug 02, 2009 1:33 pm | |
| Ooh, I want to read this. | |
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Andypaw Founder
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| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:22 am | |
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Doger Moderator
Posts : 1763 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : Virginia, USA Job/hobbies : Uhh Falling. A LOT! :)
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:31 pm | |
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Andypaw Founder
Posts : 6694 Reputation : 84 Join date : 2009-07-07
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Mon Aug 03, 2009 1:31 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:11 pm | |
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Andypaw Founder
Posts : 6694 Reputation : 84 Join date : 2009-07-07
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:12 pm | |
| Your format it wrong! It's confusing. Like this: "Hey!" blah said. "Hi." Blah said, "So what's up, im so bored WTF is so fun. " "Oh." "Awesome." LIKE, SKIP LINES. Well, its still kinda good | |
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Druqqie Adminstrator
Posts : 3660 Reputation : 47 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : New York.
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:21 pm | |
| Erhm. Good so far, but add more detail. The day is zooming by in one paragraph. | |
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Andypaw Founder
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| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:26 pm | |
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iTailz Moderator
Posts : 588 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : My animal crossing town, OpuCity! Job/hobbies : Baking, Singing and Drawing
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:27 pm | |
| I can't add more until Tuesday. It's really hard to write on my itouch. It's pretty hard just to write this!! | |
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Andypaw Founder
Posts : 6694 Reputation : 84 Join date : 2009-07-07
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:12 pm | |
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Druqqie Adminstrator
Posts : 3660 Reputation : 47 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : New York.
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:59 pm | |
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Andypaw Founder
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| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:08 pm | |
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Druqqie Adminstrator
Posts : 3660 Reputation : 47 Join date : 2009-07-07 Location : New York.
| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:02 pm | |
| write more soon. | |
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Andypaw Founder
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| Subject: Re: A New Life - By Taylor Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:38 pm | |
| too bad she can't on her iPod touch | |
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