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Ryan got home from school and put his backpack down.
"How was your da--" Ryan's mother started to say.
"Here's a note from a teacher, and today's test. Okay... well, see ya." Ryan ran to his room and quickly got on the computer. He typed in http://www.whatthefun.forumomtion.com. He wanted to roleplay with his friends on WebkinzOnly. He started to type something on the "Teenage Horrors" roleplay but his mom called him.

"What is this about?!" his mom asked, angrily. "You got a C- on your test! This is like your 30th one! Did you study?"
"Yes, mom." Ryan lied. His mom looked at him and Ryan started to admit what that he didn't really.
"..Fine.... I didn't stud--"
"You're grounded." the mom shouted.
"What?! Why? Andy was making a new theme and he was going to make me a--"
"Who is this Andy? You should be studying. Do your homework! After you're finished, you may play on the computer and talk with the Andy person!"
"I don't have any tests tomorrow!"
Ryan sighed. He groaned. He moaned. He screamed, "I hate you!"

Ryan slammed the door. His mom already took out the plug to the computer and put it away.
Ryan started to study. He read every math problem carefully. He did his homework.
He started doing the extra credit work and actually thought it was fun.
I shouldn't be doing this. Doing homework is for jerks... And why will I study? We have no tests tomorrow! Ryan thought. Ryan started to like doing homework. It was fun figuring things out.
Ryan's sister, Kelly came in. "Come on! Mom said you're not grounded!"
"I know, but I want to--"
"Come on!
"Why?" Ryan asked.
"Because Andy is making you a new adminstrator!!"
"I don't care."
"WHAT?! I THOUGHT YOU LOVED WTF!"
"I still do, but I have to manage my time and study."
"Oh, whatever. Pffttt." Kelly laughed. "Your loss."

RINGGGG!
"Wake up, Ryan!" Kelly shouted and then started to laugh. Then, Ryan heard his mom laughing, too.
"What's so funny?" Ryan asked.
"Well, you were repeating math problems in your sleep!"
Ryan blushed. "Guess I studied so much."
"Didn't you say there wasn't any tests, today?." Ryan's mom said.
"Yeah...."
"So, why did you study..?"
"Because you told me to..."
"No.."
"Yess..."
"No, I told you to do your homework and then, you can play computer.."
"Oh yeah, whatever..."

Ryan got to school. He felt like he was stupid. There was no test for crying out loud! I could've been an Adminstrator!
Ryan walked to his Math class.
"Hi, good morning. Today we will have a pop quiz."
Ryan grinned. He did study for a reason.

"That test was so hard!" Ryan's friend said.
Ryan laughed. "No, it wasn't. It was so easy."
Ryan's friend laughed so loud. "Easy for the geeks. Probably hard for you!"
"I bet I'll get a 90 or over."
"Five bucks."
"DEAL!"

The next day, Ryan went to his math class, excited.
"Hello, class. No one did good on the math test. There were a few 100's, one 90, and ehh... some 60's. I am so happy someone got 100."
Kyle, a nerd, smiled. "I probably got 100."
Ryan didn't doubt it. Kyle always got 100s.
The math teacher handed out the tests. Kyle got a frown.
"98? THAT IS NOT FAIR!!" Kyle cried.
Everyone laughed.
"Ryan, you did a good job."
Ryan got the test back.
100!

LESSON:
Work hard for something you want, like a good grade on a test. Don't play so much computer, and make plans of when to study. Study in a comfortable place.

You have some mistakes.

too bad.:]